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Priyanga
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Please help to clear my doubt if anyone has experienced the same. I got the following feedback from the assessor.
1. The career episode you have presented provides insufficient detail of the engineering work personally undertaken by you and does not demonstrate your competencies as Professional Engineer. The episode is too general and lacks any depth in terms of engineering/technical details. It is not sufficient to merely describe what you did, but you have to describe/illustrate how you did it.
2. Please elaborate and include sufficient technical details (e.g. design parameters, design calculations, diagrams, design models, simulations, analysis, results, etc.) but do not provide excessive.
3. Focus on how you applied your engineering knowledge and skills in the nominated occupation. That is state - what you did and describe - how you did it in a logical order, emphasising your own personal role should be presented in ‘Personal Engineering Activity’ part of the episode, and should clearly illustrate how you addressed the competency units and elements required for Professional Engineer.
4. Please rewrite this career episode, emphasising your professional engineering competencies in more detail. Kindly refer to pages 18-20 and 31-36 of the MSA booklet regarding the format of career episodes and competency units & elements required. Also, update the summary statement accordingly.
My doubt is, according to the 4th point, should I edit the career episode I submitted OR should I write a new career episode?
1. The career episode you have presented provides insufficient detail of the engineering work personally undertaken by you and does not demonstrate your competencies as Professional Engineer. The episode is too general and lacks any depth in terms of engineering/technical details. It is not sufficient to merely describe what you did, but you have to describe/illustrate how you did it.
2. Please elaborate and include sufficient technical details (e.g. design parameters, design calculations, diagrams, design models, simulations, analysis, results, etc.) but do not provide excessive.
3. Focus on how you applied your engineering knowledge and skills in the nominated occupation. That is state - what you did and describe - how you did it in a logical order, emphasising your own personal role should be presented in ‘Personal Engineering Activity’ part of the episode, and should clearly illustrate how you addressed the competency units and elements required for Professional Engineer.
4. Please rewrite this career episode, emphasising your professional engineering competencies in more detail. Kindly refer to pages 18-20 and 31-36 of the MSA booklet regarding the format of career episodes and competency units & elements required. Also, update the summary statement accordingly.
My doubt is, according to the 4th point, should I edit the career episode I submitted OR should I write a new career episode?