EA Engineering Australia Feedback on My Career Episodes and submitted reports ?

Hamza zahoor

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Hi
I have submitted my Career episodes and got this feedback from EA ?
I am electrical Engineer And applying for MSA.
1.I have identified a high percentage of the similarity between submitted career episodes and other sources, including the episodes submitted by other applicants.
2.The similarity was identified between text, pictures, diagrams, plots etc.
3.Please, note that as per MSA Booklet, page 18, p.2.5.3 Plagiarism, “Career episodes … must be written entirely in your own words”.
4.Please, provide a detailed written explanation on that matter

i have time till 30/08/21.
Any Help will be appreciated.
 

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Hi
I have submitted my Career episodes and got this feedback from EA ?
I am electrical Engineer And applying for MSA.
1.I have identified a high percentage of the similarity between submitted career episodes and other sources, including the episodes submitted by other applicants.
2.The similarity was identified between text, pictures, diagrams, plots etc.
3.Please, note that as per MSA Booklet, page 18, p.2.5.3 Plagiarism, “Career episodes … must be written entirely in your own words”.
4.Please, provide a detailed written explanation on that matter

i have time till 30/08/21.
Any Help will be appreciated.
Issue is clear that you have copied some of the content which comes under plagiarism. So better to write it again in your own words without copying anything including the general definitions and pictures too
 
MSA
2018-08-02
Skill
261111
SC
189/190
Point
75/80
EOI
2018-08-17
Nom.
2018-11-11
Inv.
2018-11-11
App.
2018-12-22
CO
2019-03-27
PCC
2019-02-23
HC
2019-02-18
Grant
2019-06-03
IED
2020-02-20

Hamza zahoor

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Issue is clear that you have copied some of the content which comes under plagiarism. So better to write it again in your own words without copying anything including the general definitions and pictures too
Thanks alot sir for reply.
What should I do now ?
They ask me for letter only I can’t send Career episodes again ?
Should I accept my mistake or defend it ?
I have submitted all my documents prepared by CDR writers Australia agents
 

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Thanks alot sir for reply.
What should I do now ?
They ask me for letter only I can’t send Career episodes again ?
Should I accept my mistake or defend it ?
I have submitted all my documents prepared by CDR writers Australia agents
The explanation you can provide should be based on standard definitions and references. You can say that since the topic is quite generic so you took many things as it is from various references. You can also attach many proofs from difference books and references to support your claim. If you have exactly copied someone else's CDR then you cant do anything. It all depends how much you have copied and was it genuine or not. Neverthless, you have only one chance to prove your legitimacy so use it wisely
 
MSA
2018-08-02
Skill
261111
SC
189/190
Point
75/80
EOI
2018-08-17
Nom.
2018-11-11
Inv.
2018-11-11
App.
2018-12-22
CO
2019-03-27
PCC
2019-02-23
HC
2019-02-18
Grant
2019-06-03
IED
2020-02-20

Hamza zahoor

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The explanation you can provide should be based on standard definitions and references. You can say that since the topic is quite generic so you took many things as it is from various references. You can also attach many proofs from difference books and references to support your claim. If you have exactly copied someone else's CDR then you cant do anything. It all depends how much you have copied and was it genuine or not. Neverthless, you have only one chance to prove your legitimacy so use it wisely
Yes I understand definitely I have only one chance. So You recommend to accept the similarities and Proceed with all evidences and references.
Because I think Defending it might cause problem
 

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If you have a plausible explanation (e.g., the common parts are not your main contribution, instead include something like literature survey or common references), you have good chance defending it (at the least, they may ask you to rewrite some part of it).

If you just copied contribution from somewhere else as well, good chance that they will consider it seriously and reject your application (even can put some ban).
 
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